Thesis- Darfur is Dying uses moral issues of genocide to display the seriousness of global awarness as an educational tool whereas BMW M3 Challenge uses fun and games to educate users about their product which is not as affective as an educational persuader.
Introduction
-Leading sentences
- Describe types of video games
Body 1-
-Explain both video games
-Describe the message received when playing both games
- Explain how both games educate in a similar way
Body 2-
-Describe Darfur is Dying
-Explain what type of game it is
- Describe how it gets the point across
- Explain moral issues
- Discuss genocide
-Explain effectiveness
Body 3-
-Describe BMW3 Challenge
-Explain the game
-Describe how it gets the point across
-Explain what type of people it targets
-Explain effectiveness
Body 4-
-Compare and contrast games
- Describe if it gets the point across
-Answer thesis
Conclusion-
-Restate thesis and final answer
- Review what was previously mentioned
-Explain if tactics worked
